Sunday, September 13, 2009

Every kind of music genre has infiltrated my for as long as I can remember. I remember my Dad playing Rage against the machine since i was little. While my mom switches her songs from techno, to hip hop, to even country. I didn't listen to anything particular, since I listened to many different kinds of music while I grew up. I can't really think of many other memories that have to do with music.

MHM
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  1. AnonymousOctober 11, 2009 at 6:01 PM

    This was supposed to be about 250 words. You could get there (or at least closer) by providing a few more specifics about your Mom's music (songs and artists, not just genres) and what you listened to when you were younger.

    This is a sentence fragment: While my mom switches her songs from techno, to hip hop, to even country. To fix it, either link it to the previous sentence with a comma, or get rid of that opening "While."

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